Views of the Barossa

"Snow drops" like snow flakes,

Dance across the hills,

Float across the valley,

Winter breezes circle a valley,

Little white flowers,

Float in the air,

Sprinkles of green,

Flikr among the white,

Floating on air gracefully,

The hills and valley's,

Hide so many treasures,

While making their entrance for winter and spring,

Bees dance and hover,

Gathering pollen, busy little bees,

During winter and spring,

Careful though,

Bulbs hidden in the darkness,

Hold poisonous venom,

Delicate flowers,

With full bloom,

Fragrance wafts across the valleys,

A perfume so gentle,

Reminding us all, each an everyone,

The divine perfume, created by God,

For each other,

Walk across the valleys and hills,

Beware of the box thorn,

It leaves wounds on your legs,

You must reach the top of the hills,

Cast your eyes down upon a valley floor,

There are shadows and footprints of a journey,

Walk the Barossa valley and you may be surprised.

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Reviews

[Riverz]

Snow drops like snow flakes
Dance across the hills
Float across the valley's
Winter breezes circle a valley ........... so are they flakes, or drops?? are they dancing, floating, dropping, or circling???? this is muddled

[B.J]

They are flowers we call them snow drops and I described them as snow flackes

[Riverz]

in that case try some quotation marks and capitals to signify a name

[B.J]

Thank you for your suggestion I did do some corrections

[Riverz]

yer welcome. might want to readjust the apostrophe/spelling in "valley's"

[wordman]

walk that valley,you might be surprised
it`s almost like a new world for us americans
different climate,trees and animals

[B.J]

The Barossa is a must the freedom is unreal even when you are not in a good mood. The blue skies across the valley are so huge...I am writing myself into a good mood..Great job.:) A kangaroo sometimes runs past my lounge window.

[wordman]

yes ,I can see it

[B.J]

hahahah:)>>>>>>>>>>>> you made me laugh

[wordman]

that's what I do,i bring joy