Till one day

Losely based on life

She held her head high,

Not looking down,

Always looking for,

That lonely star,

That followed her walks,

Her eyes would smile,

This lone morning as she found her favourite star,

Her courage, was always there,

She smiled as she went about her day,

She was always there

Love, happiness, to inspire us all

There was sadness in her life

But her beauty always shone through

Nobody knew the sadness she felt

She hid it among the beauty she created around her

Life flowed through her veins, like a long journey into the never-never

With the sun shining over the horizon, each day

She smiles and carries on searching for her star

She held her head high,Not looking down, Always looking for,That lonely star,

Nobody knew the sadness she felt, She was always there, Till one day.

Reviews

[wordman]

I think this is your best one yet,vivid colors,and showing the beauty with in

[Sami Khalil]

Based in life and spread worldwide by your mighty pen. I felt what she felt and all thanks to you...Excellent rendering...:).......

[B.J]

Thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[W R Stowe]

favourite Is favorite other than that this is an awsome poem of a strong love all the way until she passed could of been a mother or a wife nice

[B.J]

I'm an Australian we spell it different, still under the English language rules...Loosely based on life

[W R Stowe]

ok guess its a yankee thing

[B.J]

Hahaha! yeah I know sometimes I think, why didn't we get our own language down here. But no they still stick with the English

[W R Stowe]

Why you say that like its a bad thing mate lol

[B.J]

Some of our spelling is so different and some kids have trouble with the English language at school. Because it is spelled different than it sounds

[W R Stowe]

they say the english language is the hardest language to learn

[B.J]

Hahaha! Yeas it is when you are going to school a lot of kids now in school spell how they wish too, like the american way. How things sound. They get in trouble for it here, I think personally in the world the way it is and in the instant world of the internet, there should be one spelling.

[W R Stowe]

society seems to make all the rules

[B.J]

sure does.....:)>>>>