Impressions

Impressions

A Poem by B.J
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The feel of a child

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Out of your eyes
I see tiny reflections
Creating complexions
From your eyes
To your complexion 
I feel your tiny feet
So soft and pure
I touch your tiny fingers
So soft and pure
In my hand
We walk
Impressions
We create
Oceans behold
You create ripples
Of a woman to be
Footprints that grow
As the years flow
Ripples behold footprints
Through time
Reflections of time
As you grow
You don't need my hand anymore
You are a woman
Chasing your dreams
At times you do need my hand
But
We stand on our own
We are confident
We know our way
To know our mother is there
In the back ground
Following your footprints
Helping silently

© 2014 B.J


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It is so exciting to see you in your children irrespective of their age, mile stones or challenges to grow right. Beautifully penned with excellent flow, I can see how God watches us his reflections and reviewing Bj's poem, take care

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

thank you so much for your comment
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

You welcome BJ, take care, happy holiday wishes in advance
Beautiful, B.J. Children are special and if it's your own children they are even more special. When my first child was born, I cried. It's was stronger than myself, such a wonder, my wife and I had made a new person, a living being, so small and helpeless..you couldn't not love such sweet thing. Now my children are already grown up persons. And still I see the child in them they once were. I think that will never change. I'm moved by your poem. Thank you for sharing. :) Rudi

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind review
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

10 Years Ago

My pleasure, B.J. Have a good day. :) Rudi
this is a beautiful tribute and the theme that you are always there was special

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

Than you so much for your comment
oh! i love this ... i have four children and was at the bedside for all their births .. tiny hands is such a perfect picture you paint .. all but the most callous see potential in an infant (i see that same potential while in the womb) we wonder, we guide, we share, we teach and that marvelous point where just the right amount of rebellion stirs them to there own path without harm is such a bitter sweet moment .. and off they go .. your poem stirs my heart in gratitude that our little family has made it though ... my youngest is 27 :)
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, my youngest is 37...She works hard for her family. I have 2 girls
Einstein Noodle

10 Years Ago

God bless you!! :) i have two and two ..
E.
B.J

10 Years Ago

:)............................................

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B.J
B.J

South Australia, Rural, Australia



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