I lay awake listening

I lay awake listening

A Poem by B.J
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The Australian ding.

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I lay silently listening
Outside my window I hear
The morning cries
The morning cries of dingo's
I lay in my campervan thinking
A beautiful sound that echoes
Throughout the bush
Alerting you, at daybreak
I pull back my curtain
To see the golden sun peaking through
Sounds of the bush, scrub
As my Dad used to say
A pair of eyes peak out from behind a tree
A reflection of a golden fur coat in the morning sun
Lonely it looks standing there
Frightened
Quietly I try to move
Not to arose others
This dog is not a pet
This dog is not native
But today it is Australian as you and I
It hears me moving about in my van
Nature at is best
I look out my window again
To see the dingo slowly moving away
Maybe it's looking for food for pups?

© 2014 B.J


Author's Note

B.J
A few years ago while I was traveling I did see and hear dingo's. Lately I've been thinking about my journey and decided to try and do a poem about the Australian dingo.

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vivid insight into your external world
thanks for inviting us


-Dream

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

your most welcome
Wow, how amazing it would to have Australia for a back yard. The last line truly exposes your inner desire, pulls the curtain to peek at the future... If only a tiny bit / be more personal, open the inside poet. Other than the dingos what other sounds play in this symphony? Wonderful writing, I get a sense of you're water painting red clay sunsets, the tire rub hum down the highways, your poetry is a gift to me. Thank you.

Beautiful country, Australian, a departure from U.S. Country, Country....wheat and bullies... Jk
Nice to meet you B.J.

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

Nice to meet you one day I would love to see your country, the real America the real people...I love.. read more
Butch Decatoria

10 Years Ago

Lol that's Mojo, a parsons Jack Russell. He's a personality. Gnight
B.J

10 Years Ago

They certainly are but loveable my daughter has a Jack Russell and he is a cheeky little blighter bu.. read more

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B.J
B.J

South Australia, Rural, Australia



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