A personal view of psalm 64

A personal view of psalm 64

A Poem by B.J
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I've had to do a lot of soul searching over the past few years. Being lost for quite a few years. I do a lot of reading and found my way around psalm 64

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God does listen
I am living proof
I have survived
I have been reduced to a whimper
I've whined and groaned
Obsessed with problems
Full of dark feelings
I've hidden from life
Not wanting to be found
Frightened of tongues wagging
Weapons of poisoned words
Words as sharp as arrow
Often ambushed me
Without warning
Not caring where they hit
Dodging them for many years
Not wanting to see their evil purpose
Watching for traps secretly set
Not looking at each other for days on end
Oh! the perfect crime hidden for many years
Behind closed doors
A mystery hidden from the world
God has shone the golden arrow
Into the hearts of the evil ones
They have been shunned  by a maddening crowd
    
God has listened to me
His work is the talk of the town
I'm glad to have met good people
They have shown me the light of God
I praise them and sing my praises to God.
Amen

© 2014 B.J


Author's Note

B.J
A rather personal poem about life

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Very much like Psalms 64
beautifully done my friend


Thank you for sharing such a
wonderful piece and for your kind
review and comments you left on my page.



God bless. Benita

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

your most welcome and thank you for the visit
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you and you're welcome. God bless it was a pleasure to read. Benita
B.J

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much
good interpretation I think
compelling to read

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind review
closed

10 Years Ago

you're very much welcome

-Dream

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B.J

South Australia, Rural, Australia



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I live in rural South Australia, among the best wine district in the state. I enjoy dabbling with words, seeing what I can create. I appreciate creative reviews. more..

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