Dream varied by dream

Dream varied by dream

A Poem by B.J
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Dreams kept locked up for many years

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Dream varied by dream
Last night through noise of the night
Vision of dreams became clear

In a lighted place
I looked inside my heart
A kaleidoscope of dreams existed

Colourful dreams
For years there's been a knot in my dreams
Now visions all mixed up

But dreams
Kept me tossing and turning
Trying to remember

Dreams from the outside
Nowhere to hide
A web floated wide

My head firmly pushed into the pillow
"Go back to sleep'
Sleep was a slow journey

That web of dreams still wide
Time to get up
And see what the world brings today

© 2014 B.J


Author's Note

B.J
A simple poem about dreams, they kept me tossing and turning last night so many. I could not remember, so I got up. And started looking about.

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Hate that - when I can't remember what I dreamed and yet I know it was vivid, interesting. Loved the phrasing in this "a kaleidoscope of dreams" "In a lighted place" Lovely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review, much appreciated
I love poems that address dreams. I deal with dreams a lot in my writing, but every writer has his or her unique take on them. This one is simply wonderfully worded, too. Outstanding, Barb!

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the visit and comment..
Hope and dreams keep close to heart irrespective of time and place, well penned, enjoyed

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the comment I had a better nights sleep last night. I actually had fun writing that po.. read more
That was my night--last night!
Thanks for sharing your views through poetry.

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, your comment most welcome.
Dreams can be a journey bringing the clear and the mysterious together into a kaleidoscope of lighted places. Excellent...:)................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)................
B.J

10 Years Ago

:)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

:)...................
Well a very interesting and well done piece.
I felt as if i was addressing my mind when it wouldn't shut up at night .
Thank you for sharing.
Enjoy it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

It is terrible when our mind races especially when we are trying to sleep...Thank you for your comme.. read more
Angad Waraich

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome.
B.J

10 Years Ago

:)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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Added on September 30, 2014
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B.J
B.J

South Australia, Rural, Australia



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