Unraveling

Unraveling

A Poem by B.J
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I have been creating peace for the past few months

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Nights spent alone now
Yet I am not alone
I've traveled so far
In my mind and on foot

Unraveling my mind
Footprints around this land
My mind was like a jigsaw
A puzzle needing to be solved

Sometimes I trace my footprints
They are imprinted in my mind
I breathe the air
I breathe the freedom
This land has given me


Nights spent alone now
Yet I am not alone
I've traveled so far
In my mind and on foot

At night I sit with my dogs at my side
Listening to the sounds of the country
The wind and the rain at times
Sometimes nights so still
I hear sounds of nature

A new day unfolds
A new jigsaw
Wind and rain
Storms, Sunshine
Grey skies, Blue skies

A fellow in the skies
Once told me
Time heals all wounds
I traveled in time

To a new place in time
Unweaving, unwinding, unraveling
The storms, the grey skies
Finding blue skies, and sunshine

Now at night I sit with my dogs at my side
Listening to the sounds of the country
The wind and the rain at times
Sometimes nights so still
I hear sounds of nature
Peace created

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© 2014 B.J


Author's Note

B.J
Dedicated to my new life and the peace I created.

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I enjoyed the description and the good places you took me with.
"At night I sit with my dogs at my side
Listening to the sounds of the country
The wind and the rain at times
Sometimes nights so still
I hear sounds of nature"
Above lines would be a good place to be. In the calmness and tender hands of nature. No better place to be. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much I appreciate any comments
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
B.J

10 Years Ago

:)....................................
I liked the repetition and how it built, the last verse being fantastic. I hope you enjoy the peace you have created :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


B.J

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment

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Added on September 13, 2014
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Tags: freedom, mind, jigsaw

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B.J
B.J

South Australia, Rural, Australia



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