Messages from the heart

Just thoughts

Winds whisper messages
Messages carried on the wind
Rushing everywhere
Probing my mind
Spiraling around
My asking eyes
Could finally see
Moon's full enchantment
Spinning great splendour
On lover's hearts
Sparkling souls
Joined together
In harmonious song
Souls that become one
Messages from the heart
On a night
When the moon is full
Enchanting the hearts of two
Becoming one
Protected by the shadows
Of the moon's full splendour

Reviews

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

I really like the fullness of each phrase. You take away all the words that aren't necessary. I like that too. In addition, you artfully convey a short story, with very few words. Oh yeah, did I say,"I really like this. Write on my friend.

[B.J]

Thank you so much kind friend

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

This would have an attractive, outer shape, if you centered the formatting.

[B.J]

Thank you will have a go need a distraction for a while then get back to some tidying up