Escapement

Escapement

A Poem by Pollai
"

Describe yourself

"
Bred, 
To live through life 
Ever-adapting

Like clockwork, 
This escapement 
Confines me

© 2013 Pollai


Author's Note

Pollai
Written as a part of something that asked you to describe yourself. Let me know of any feedback, enjoy :)

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ends on a cunnundrum, a duality

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds good :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the clock/anchor of the gears (escapement) usage in this. I think it is extremely effective in this short piece.
And for it being so short, you managed to capture so much in the lines.

An extremely good piece. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Pollai

11 Years Ago

Thank you Rogue, always love your feedback :)
Sounds like a plan

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 6, 2013
Last Updated on June 7, 2013
Tags: Define, Life, Growth, Persona, Identity

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Pollai

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