Escapement

Describe yourself

Bred, 

To live through life 

Ever-adapting

Like clockwork, 

This escapement 

Confines me

Author's Note

Written as a part of something that asked you to describe yourself. Let me know of any feedback, enjoy :)

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

agree with TL Boehm ... this is my cup of tea ... like it a lot
E.

[bobc]

P...very, very nice...particularly escapement. Thanx...bobc

[TL Boehm]

This escapement confines me. What an intriguing line. Very enigmatic. Well done.

[Jack...]

Very cool indeed. Life does place many walls around us at times, it is how we decorate these walss that allows us to live within ourselves.

[Pollai]

Thank you Jack, appreciate you taking the time to review :)

[lMarling]

Very poignant piece. Simpler than your other pieces, which works well. Reminds me of Salvador Dali's "persistence of memory" paintings.


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[Pollai]

Thank you, I never had that image in mind but something else rather. Glad to see you could take your own imagery with it though :)

[SyberRose]

I think you described it well...Ever adapting and clockwork were the key words here.Rose:)

[Pollai]

Thank you rose :)

[Inda]

There is no escape; that is, once you define yourself.

[Pollai]

Thats great Inda! Thank you :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

A concise piece. I like the simplicity of the words and the message as well. Nice overall concept and flow. A nice little poem.

[Pollai]

Thanks Sarah :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple and highly descriptive, well done. good read.

[Pollai]

Thank you

[Mike Emil]

escape?
not part of the breeding program
per chance to dream
brandy explains it all!
HAI!!!

[Pollai]

You get it, good sir ;)