My Master my King

Some thoughts, open to your interpretation

My Master my King

Before whom I kneel

For whom these fields I sow

I follow you blindly

For when they ask

“What is the matter?”

Say, blindness has set me free

 

My Master my King

For whom these fields I sow

I question sometimes

If blind, how can I know?

I can wander in pastures

But with what aim

When your words don’t show?

 

My Master my King

My thoughts they ache

Before whom I kneel

I think for peace's sake

If my hearts forever bowing

In craze for you

When will I feel?

 

Forgive me for I attain

The right to question

Though my love for you

Isn’t fickle

I wonder if these wishes

One day cause me to burn

With you, I only wish to reason

 

I wish to gaze at the stars

And seek where you are

How you started this

And how you calculated

This majestic mist

How you designed it all

So simply in a twist

 

Fear not

For you will be

My Master my King

But pardon me,

For I do seek answers
To some questions

Worth asking

Reviews

[Rogue]

I really like the structure and wording here. I perceived this more as a spiritual piece than an errant knight serving nobility. We can only follow blindly and unquestioningly when there is complete trust. Given the state of our world these days, that is a rare thing to acquire.

Extremely thought provoking and well penned. :)

[Pollai]

It's open to perception but it is a personal piece. Thank you :)

[gombeggar]

'my master, my king'...very well done writ

[Inda]

Nice flow, really enjoyed it.

[Pollai]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Love the story progression and stunning words play here, I also like the structure of this piece it is brilliant. A lovely piece with engaging style painted in a captivating flow of positive thought. Great write keep writing!

[Pollai]

Really appreciate the positive feedback. Cheers

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:)) welcome