A good creation

A good creation

A Poem by Victoria

All the way from up above
God created a girl from Canada
With hazel eyes
And the right size!
Five foot nine
And three quarters
She runs the bases
And cuts no corners.
Sports are her thing
Baseball is the sport
Maybe she will find a boy
Whom her time is worth!
With dark brown hair
She is so fare.
Kids she adores
Just like the outdoors.
What a wonderful creation!

© 2011 Victoria


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Very sweet poem. Really enjoyed it. This reminds me of other good creations of God.
Great Job.

Posted 11 Years Ago



Sugar and spice with everything nice...;) what a delightful tribute poem to one so fair...!

Excellent

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hey!! this was fun to read!.

I like this style of write a lot.

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

"What a wonderful creation" you mean creature?

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 9 people found this review constructive.

Awww that is soo cute:) It's really interesting to see how other poeple describe me:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Victoria
Victoria

Malibu, CA



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My name is Victoria. I live large and dream even larger. My life consists of modeling in my free time and traveling the world but when I'm feeling down and out of control, I write. Writing inspires me.. more..

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