Stuck

I'm lost.
No simple way to put it.
I want to go somewhere
with my life.
But I'm lost.
Without you,
I'm lost.
Because of you,
I'm lost.
But because of me,
I'm stuck.
I didn't stop you.
I didn't stop them.
I just listened.
Obeyed.
Lied to myself.
Because of this,
I'm stuck.

Author's Note

Just a way to sum up my life right now.

Reviews

[GTVile]

Very much to the point. No need for elaboration with this kind of literary assertiveness. Perhaps the best part of it, though, is how you make sure you own up for the things that you may have done to put yourself in the current situation, instead of just casting the shadow of blame on everyone else but yourself.

"But because of me,
I'm stuck."

This is candid and honest and suggests that you have a firm grip on reality and the circumstances. If nothing else, you've certainly got the first foot forward to getting out the situation. Very good.

[zombiikillah666]

sounds like my life right about now. :/
i really like this. nice write. (:

[SamBug]

I like this. I can feel the internal struggle your feeling because, well, quite frankly, I'm stuck too.

[larryb]

Well hon just get yourself unstuck, i can tell your not a air brain you will figure this all out :)