God made us all

God made us all

A Poem by Victoria

God made my mother.
He made my father.
In turn,
it created me.
God created all.
God loves all.
Why is it
that that life
that He made for us,
that He gave us,
is the easiest
to take for granted?
Why is it so easy
to take Him for granted.
I contemplate over these
questions every day.
Sometimes, I am guilty
of slipping from my faith
and life becomes filthy
for me and what I see.
I race around the night forest
and search in desperation
Like Young Goodman Brown
when he lost his own Faith.
Except now,
I search for the Faith
once held in everyone's heart
but doesn't seem to hold true.
The Faith that inspired migration.
It is up to me
to find the Faith in all people
not because I want to.
But because Jesus did.
Because mankind will one day fall
on their knees for The Lord.
Because one day,
mankind will fall
if they don't remember that
God made us all.

© 2010 Victoria


Author's Note

Victoria
I felt inspired to write about the Lord after reading the passage, And ye shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you free. (John 8:32).

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Inspirational poem that certainly carries the endless truth of divine love and commitment, giving everyone the potential for happiness, goodness, and peace of mind. The truth indeed holds the key to freedom...!

Excellent....!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


So very true! It seems like there's way to few poeple that are brave enough to tell others about our precious Lord! I admit, I fail miserably in this area but I want to improve. Thanks so much for the inspiration:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


The 8th line down....says "That That life".... you should correct that.

But i love this one! You ask very good questions....heartfelt, intelligent questions. I appreciate and respect your faith.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think this poem is beautiful. I really like the way this poem puts God up beacuse i Love god and i am a religous Person. I love this poem Wonderful Job :) :) :) Nice Write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Except now,
I search for the Faith
once held in everyone's heart
but doesn't seem to hold true.
The Faith that inspired migration.
It is up to me
to find the Faith in all people
not because I want to.
But because Jesus did.
Because mankind will one day fall
on their knees for The Lord.
Because one day,
mankind will fall
if they don't remember that
God made us all.

... i think that this verse has a very powerful message for all of us ... and ought to be read by one and all ... it is nothing but the absence of "Faith" ... that is causing all the disorder and chaos in the world today ... making it grim ... rather than ... peaceful ... beautifully written verse ... it's all heart and all soul ... and extremely profound ... the lines i quoted are just extremely moving ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this poem. I love the view on God and how we will fall if we do not remember that god made us all. I think this is a great poem and love for God. And We should all respect that. Great poem. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this is so deep and true! What a wonderful poem! I hope someone's eyes are opened by this. Mines were. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great! I like this so much and how you are inspired from a verse. This is a truthful and great piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is very good i like its not m y kid of poem but it was very good

Posted 14 Years Ago


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My name is Victoria. I live large and dream even larger. My life consists of modeling in my free time and traveling the world but when I'm feeling down and out of control, I write. Writing inspires me.. more..

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