It's just something

It's just something

A Poem by Victoria

It's everywhere.
It's nowhere.
It grabs you
and pulls you in.
It taunts you.
It's mean.
It's loving.
It hurts where it shouldn't.

You want to throw it.
You want to leave it.
You need to have it.
It's like your drug.
Addiction.
Contradiction.

The pain hurts.
The feeling assures.
It's just something
something in the air.
Something in your heart
Something that,
in the right time,
can be the best thing
that has ever happened.

Love. 
It's just something.

© 2010 Victoria


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I like this poem I especially like the photo. :) Good Job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow,17 reviews! I guess you must be hugely Famous! I Don't think it matters what i have to say,but anyways,here goes-
Its a very simple and beautiful poem.Half of the poetry on this site is nonsensical or vague,but i love the fact that yours isn't so.Good Job,Keep Going!

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice words Victoria. Love is something, Love is everything. We can't live without it, and sometimes we can't live with it. but it seems we are always searching for that perfect one.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This has a great structure, holds the attention! xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wonderful. I love how you get the reader hooked on each and every little word that describes love. Such powerful words and expressions.

-Will

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love is everything. I should read this one first. Oh ah an Oh well...
Only confirms that you understand all the everything in that topic! So it is easy enough to great and beautifully expresses. I've seen a lot of love poems. Nice to read a piece that was about just Love... What. it's exquisite. Thank you. I see by visits an reviews lots of others did too.

...Ro..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love is the biggest mystery... can make you cry when you are happy and can make you strong in your weakest moments among other things... you said it with sharp precise wording. Nicely done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow.. I love this. A LOT. You really just put into words a very unexplicable feeling, because it is everything you wrote, which is ironic, considering that some of those descriptions were the exact opposites of each other. But reading it, and thinking about people I love, it makes perfect sense. GREAT write. 10/10.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A cute puzzle. Well thought out.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Victoria
Victoria

Malibu, CA



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My name is Victoria. I live large and dream even larger. My life consists of modeling in my free time and traveling the world but when I'm feeling down and out of control, I write. Writing inspires me.. more..

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