It's just something

It's just something

A Poem by Victoria

It's everywhere.
It's nowhere.
It grabs you
and pulls you in.
It taunts you.
It's mean.
It's loving.
It hurts where it shouldn't.

You want to throw it.
You want to leave it.
You need to have it.
It's like your drug.
Addiction.
Contradiction.

The pain hurts.
The feeling assures.
It's just something
something in the air.
Something in your heart
Something that,
in the right time,
can be the best thing
that has ever happened.

Love. 
It's just something.

© 2010 Victoria


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So true. Love is indeed everything. Great write, I enjoyed reading it. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


You did an excellent job on this. Great delivery...

Posted 14 Years Ago


so right with this poem it`s a great write and a great read well done loved it :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


you're right, love is all those things! cute poem :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love is everything and it can build foundations that can so easily be ripped apart, excellent execution of that!
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


Some very real truths! Awesome write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


really good, and true.
loooove this. (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is really good and a really good description. I love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


AMAZING! just how I was thinking of it earlier. Just this thing...like Zaphod Beeblebrox. Unpredictable, accurately incorrect, incorrectly accurate. Do I need it? Yes and no. Do I want it? Maybe so.
And I do like the way this poem is neither in favor of nor against the feeling. It just is.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This Poem Is WOOOOOOOOOOW WHOOO i love it, its beautiful. I Also Really Like thii pic :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Victoria
Victoria

Malibu, CA



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My name is Victoria. I live large and dream even larger. My life consists of modeling in my free time and traveling the world but when I'm feeling down and out of control, I write. Writing inspires me.. more..

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