It's just something

It's just something

A Poem by Victoria

It's everywhere.
It's nowhere.
It grabs you
and pulls you in.
It taunts you.
It's mean.
It's loving.
It hurts where it shouldn't.

You want to throw it.
You want to leave it.
You need to have it.
It's like your drug.
Addiction.
Contradiction.

The pain hurts.
The feeling assures.
It's just something
something in the air.
Something in your heart
Something that,
in the right time,
can be the best thing
that has ever happened.

Love. 
It's just something.

© 2010 Victoria


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you put this so nicely. great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the way you put that! You have a wonderful way with words:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I like this write a lot. Love can mean different things to different people. Your definition just rings too close to home. Nicely put!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree totally....i have felt like a heroin addict at times when i was in love...needing a fix.

I like this write! nice...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes, something it is, something that can't be stated all the way through by one person, something that is irrevocable and inexplicable.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was an amazing poem! Wow it struck right to the heart. I loved it very much. Every word went together perfectly. keep writing! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was really strong, and powerful. Really nicely written. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love is powerful, although at times I view it as a myth. I try to keep it away to avoid the pain it always brings my way. Nice write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


True you are. Love is the most dangerous weapon that has ever existed. It can destroy hearts without any chance of being traced! But it can also mend and heal like no other thing ever can. We wish we can avoid it at times. But we can't live without it. You've captured that brilliantly with this excellent work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


mmmm nice! sweet words. You had me thinking....

Posted 14 Years Ago



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My name is Victoria. I live large and dream even larger. My life consists of modeling in my free time and traveling the world but when I'm feeling down and out of control, I write. Writing inspires me.. more..

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