Life

It's not hard
but it's not easy
the things we do
and what we don't do.
Life.
it grabs a hold of us
and we live it,
and sometimes
we don't live it.

Reviews

[larryb]

Clever poem i liked the message of it :)

[*]

Good point Victorla, sometimes we don't live it and that's the problem.

[Cassandra Gestalt]

"the things we don't do..."
So beautiful... I'm compelled to write a reply!

[Not A Writer]

Good enjambment on line 5. Good poem. I enjoyed it and it is very much true back in the past and today as well.

[jeff hackworth]

good poem, and i hope to see u inprove

[SamBug]

These words are very true. Sometimes you have to think about the life you portrayed and sometimes people aren't happy about it. Great job. :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Your word speak the truth. Nothing as bad is to look back at a life and wished you did something good. We must somehow make it even in the giving and taking of life. Not a simple task. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sofia N]

is short but I like how since is short you went straight to your point and delivered the meaning. I like it. Niece piece. Keep it up :)

[Soul Magic✯]

"It's not hard
but it's not easy
the things we do
and what we don't do." very well expressed on point. this message holds some truth and wisdom. thanks for sharing