Pure Bliss Is Just Pure Emptiness

Pure Bliss Is Just Pure Emptiness

A Poem by Twilight Moon
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its about the reality of any situation

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The bliss upon my face

For this empty heart with empty space

Another anxiety to embrace

 

Break this barricade to the end of my sorrow

End this pain and end this horror

 

Heal this way and be my aid

Or leave to die and fade

Just break this painful masquerade

 

Passion for disdain and hate

Casts a shadow upon my hidden fate

 

Pureness doesn't exist

And pain cover up all whats left of bliss

 

© 2008 Twilight Moon


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Kind of sad but well written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Sometimes it is hard to keep a clear-headedness in a situation, and it becomes unreal.
Pretty good wording over all, but it could use a bit of a polish.

For instance, instead of 'pureness' try 'purity'.

Good luck in all your future writing endeavors!


Posted 16 Years Ago



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