Fragrance...
A Poem by barricade
Burn me alive,
If you may...
And spread my ashes
In the wind...
For they shall be nothing,
But the fragrance
Of my love for you.
© 2013 barricade
Author's Note
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Deep, heartfelt emotions out on paper after ages...
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Reviews
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Wow! It's like Rumi, one of my favorite poets. The same vein as his writing.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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wow. powerful
Posted 12 Years Ago
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A nice brilliant write.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Love the simplicity of this, and how it can still convey how deep it is. Excellent.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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That is what love is all about. So true man, and so powerful.
Heart-felt!
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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beautifully bittersweet and raw,it doesn't get any more pure than that
Posted 12 Years Ago
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simple, short, an beautiful. takes a true poet to only use 7 lines and have an impact.
kudos.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Very simple, but its all you need to get the emotion in this piece. Very enjoyable
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Beautifully written! I could read it again and again.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on October 24, 2011
Last Updated on March 12, 2013
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