Fragrance...

Fragrance...

A Poem by barricade

Burn me alive,
If you may...
And spread my ashes
In the wind...
For they shall be nothing,
But the fragrance
Of my love for you.

© 2013 barricade


Author's Note

barricade
Deep, heartfelt emotions out on paper after ages...

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Wow! It's like Rumi, one of my favorite poets. The same vein as his writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow. powerful

Posted 12 Years Ago


A nice brilliant write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the simplicity of this, and how it can still convey how deep it is. Excellent.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is what love is all about. So true man, and so powerful.
Heart-felt!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifully bittersweet and raw,it doesn't get any more pure than that

Posted 12 Years Ago


simple, short, an beautiful. takes a true poet to only use 7 lines and have an impact.
kudos.


Posted 13 Years Ago


Very simple, but its all you need to get the emotion in this piece. Very enjoyable

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written! I could read it again and again.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 24, 2011
Last Updated on March 12, 2013

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