Succumbing to my pains...

I stand here in my room,

with darkness all around...

The walls painted with my blood,

and nail marks on the ground.

Listen to this silence,

and you shall hear my screams...

The resultant of your tortures,

are these sorrowful dreams.

My eyes they feel so numb,

with tears that I shed...

And now I just lay here,

wishing I were dead!

I am tired of your ramblings,

your arrogant, stubborn self...

I might succumb to these pains,

into silence I shall delve...

Reviews

[Xfaerie corpseX]

loved the imagery and the way you make your reader feel your words..loved it

[StacyPerry]

Dark and vivid. I enjoyed this piece, thank you for sharing.

[Just Plain Me]

This is REALLY good...really sad and makes me wanna give you a hug, but it's really good. haha