I'm your fool....

I'm your fool....

A Poem by barricade
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just some feelings that needed to be vent out.....

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Your ignorance, it kills me...
Your name resounding in my head,
it stabs me...
These feelings in my heart,
they mock me...
Cos you just can't accept me,
and I just can't escape thee...
You unloved me, at your will,
just left me, dying...
My beating heart...
Now still...

© 2010 barricade


Author's Note

barricade
Ode to a heart breaker...

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you unloved me!!!
my o my!!
that was so pricking!
thats how some people are....
they love and can even undo it at their whims and fancies...
too good!!!
short n crisp!
mayb a heart breaker doesnt need any more words to be wasted on them!!! ;)

:) Smile,
Krishna

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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=[ i kno this feeling to well, love is both beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. Its filed with a strong piece of emotion, that keeps flowing all the way through the piece, such a short piece of work filled with so much meaning and emotion. I loved this like hoenestly thought it was fantastic

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love this! It is a great little piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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