I'm your fool....

I'm your fool....

A Poem by barricade
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just some feelings that needed to be vent out.....

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Your ignorance, it kills me...
Your name resounding in my head,
it stabs me...
These feelings in my heart,
they mock me...
Cos you just can't accept me,
and I just can't escape thee...
You unloved me, at your will,
just left me, dying...
My beating heart...
Now still...

© 2010 barricade


Author's Note

barricade
Ode to a heart breaker...

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you unloved me!!!
my o my!!
that was so pricking!
thats how some people are....
they love and can even undo it at their whims and fancies...
too good!!!
short n crisp!
mayb a heart breaker doesnt need any more words to be wasted on them!!! ;)

:) Smile,
Krishna

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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We all have those moments where are heart is crushed and we believe it couldn’t take another beating, but time makes your heat strong again. Amazing work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aghhh, were they ever worth it? I think if you ever asked them they would tell you no.
Thats all I have for odes to fragile things.
sorry, I wish I could regain a little enthusiasm but itsa not commin.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice, indeed a true poet and a poem for a poets heart.
* Moon

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love it. You unloved me..... fabulous line. I mean saying 'You dont love me anymore' hurts also but 'you unloved me' is a much better way to say it. ...at your will..... thats good.... Well done!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very deep good write

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow Vin...
That was intense. I felt every word of every line, it was so powerful and raw. This heartbreaker seems to be a guilty pleasure though; through the hurt and pain you can still have a longing for them... That's what those heartbreakers do. Make you love them when you want to hate them the most! Anyways, I loved this. One of my new favorites from you :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing!
I really enjoyed this write.
Feelings very well expressed.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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"You unloved me, at your will,
just left me, dying..." BRIL!!
I liked this alot..
The perfect ode to someone who didn't care enough.. Really nice !!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you unloved me!!!
my o my!!
that was so pricking!
thats how some people are....
they love and can even undo it at their whims and fancies...
too good!!!
short n crisp!
mayb a heart breaker doesnt need any more words to be wasted on them!!! ;)

:) Smile,
Krishna

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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