These eyes of mine...

These eyes of mine...

A Poem by barricade

You see these eyes

and within you see,

someone with whom

she'll never be....


My words don't mean anything to her

nor do my pleas to reunite...

And the flame that there once was,

she just won't reignite...


These eyes of mine

were once a reflection,

of love, friendship

and pure affection...


Now all she sees in them is oblivion...

She feels I'm numb and cold!!!

I'm driven by ego and my temper bold!!!


But I beg again...I do beg to differ...

Something that's ever so prominent,

she just fails to decipher...


Despite of my heart's downpour

and the love for her that still overflows...

It's still unconditional and irrevocable...

But her harshness still renders us unable!!!


My love she fails to see,

words she just ignores...

I'm knocking incessantly on her heart,

but locked she has the doors!!!


She doesn't wanna see me ever now,

just doesn't wanna hear from me...

She pleads me to move on,

But that can never be!!!


If the one above really is,

And my love for her is true.

Then someday, I'm sure,

We will definitely make it through!!!




"God I pray unto thee

I ask thou for my soul...

Shower your divine blessing upon us...

So, complete we may be!

Amen..."


© 2009 barricade


Author's Note

barricade
another one...result of the same rush of feelings...desperate for a vent...

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From the title I was expecting something totally different (I like looking into someone's eyes) but what I read was better then what I had in mind. Great piece. I can truly say that we women can be very unforgiving when we are in pain. We will take your number out our phone when we know the number by heart. lol

Live, love and Learn

Lady v

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This is really good...kinda has a sadness to it...but there is still a little hope in there.
Great Job

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My love she fails to see,
words she just ignores...
I'm knocking incessantly on her heart,
but locked she has the doors!!!

This has a great heartbeat. It feels like you are secretly speaking your thoughts and I get to be a fly on the wall. It has strong emotion and determination. Well written!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay this is a fate worse than chocolate depravation, but good for getting something on paper. Throught should be through looks like a typo I make all the time in a rush.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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