These eyes of mine...

You see these eyes

and within you see,

someone with whom

she'll never be....

My words don't mean anything to her

nor do my pleas to reunite...

And the flame that there once was,

she just won't reignite...

These eyes of mine

were once a reflection,

of love, friendship

and pure affection...

Now all she sees in them is oblivion...

She feels I'm numb and cold!!!

I'm driven by ego and my temper bold!!!

But I beg again...I do beg to differ...

Something that's ever so prominent,

she just fails to decipher...

Despite of my heart's downpour

and the love for her that still overflows...

It's still unconditional and irrevocable...

But her harshness still renders us unable!!!

My love she fails to see,

words she just ignores...

I'm knocking incessantly on her heart,

but locked she has the doors!!!

She doesn't wanna see me ever now,

just doesn't wanna hear from me...

She pleads me to move on,

But that can never be!!!

If the one above really is,

And my love for her is true.

Then someday, I'm sure,

We will definitely make it through!!!

"God I pray unto thee

I ask thou for my soul...

Shower your divine blessing upon us...

So, complete we may be!

Amen..."

Author's Note

another one...result of the same rush of feelings...desperate for a vent...

Reviews

[Lady V]

From the title I was expecting something totally different (I like looking into someone's eyes) but what I read was better then what I had in mind. Great piece. I can truly say that we women can be very unforgiving when we are in pain. We will take your number out our phone when we know the number by heart. lol

Live, love and Learn

Lady v

[Jason]

Truthful and raw emotion always makes for the most passionate of art. Very metaphoric....Excellent write!

[*Evelen*]

Wow very deep man. Amazing write. thanks for sharing.

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW

very very wonderfully written indeed !!!
just marvelous !!!

[Geminair]

wow i really love this man brought out a few tears too,i feel your pain specially
"She doesn't wanna see me ever now,
just doesn't wanna hear from me...
She pleads me to move on,
But that can never be!!!"

magnificent and deep this has a life and soul of its own

[Fran Marie]

Deep emotions spring forth and I can feel the sad pain in this poignant piece~ Love Hurts!

yes, yes, it does, I think many of us can relate to this~ weLL DonE!!

[QuietPoet]

Wow, this was amazing. You poured your feelings out in this piece. The heartache will pass and someone will come along and fill it with endless love. Nicely done.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Such raw, real and poignant emotions expressed here. I can truly empathize with these feelings. Perhaps we have all been in a similar situation at one point or another. This is truly captivating - really gets to the essence of an Unconditional Love that goes awry somehow. Nicely done.
Light,
Siddartha

[*** Hey Jude***]

Wonderful heartful, and understood prose. I Agree with your prayer. Blessing to you ~ Jude :-)

[deeps]

Oh! Wow! I like this so deeply much
I know these feelings very much.
This is such a emotional write here.
Very well expressed and well written.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Powerfully profound passion.. love the depth of your yearnings.. so selfish yet not.. to want love.. to just have that divine and beautiful person who knows the full of our hearts.. and accepts it.. both the dark and light side.. when we drop the socks under the table by mistake.. or criticize and challenge the other daily.. forget to put out the garbage.. open our souls to the other. We can not have love without the ability to love ourselves and have a belief strong in someway yet still fully respecting the voice others which is not easy in reality.. as each heart beats for their own purpose and need. This was an incredible ventation that touched my soul soo deeply. In the end .. we all go to a place that has beauty and grace with not an everyday mask to face... for we all release all selfishness.. and can love to the highest degree. It is human to want to have something to hold that is only ours.. yet daily we MUST share it..protect it.. holding it freely.. and deal with everything that is only too human aiming to release the fear that can destroy it. Your writing really made me think.. I hope really find the love that you want one day just look inside a little deeper..be open and allow them to be honest so you know who they are! This is a ray of shining hope.. it your outpouring of your soul. =)