My fantasy...

just a little " something" expressing my feelings for the "night"...the time i love the most...

sitting by the window...
the night it weaves a dream...
casting a spell upon me...
enchanted, i flow along a stream...

i leave the room, bedazzled...
walk out all alone...
not knowing why i do so..
just spell bound by the unknown...

bare feet as i step out...
am greeted by the cold...
the magic has just begun...
mysteries, they unfold...

the moon shining bright...
amongst the zillion stars...
the sky, a dark shade of violet...
the clouds forming a veil, like one; of the czars...

the view; picturesque...
a living fantasy for sure...
nature playing a song...
the music ever so pure...

the wind it quickly wraps me...
in a strong embrace...
sensuously whispers in my ears...
and gently caresses my face...

i stand on my toes to reach out to thee...
and open my arms as wide...
to feel the eternal bliss...
giving me a million rushes, with each rising tide...

nature at its playful best...
teasing me to delight...
my fantasies they grow...
as i make love to the night!!!

Author's Note

wouldn't have written this one if it wasn't for a dear friend...this ones for her...
still not complete though (maybe) (think i can write more...have lots to say on this...lets see)

Reviews

[Stephanie]

Beautiful beautiful! I love nature and the night as well and this was so flowing and whimsical, I found myself being caressed by the breeze. This is a fantastic poem. You should be proud :)

[deeps]

Such a wonderful and amazing write
full of gripping emotion and beuatiful as well.

the wind it quickly wraps me...
in a strong embrace...
sensuously whispers in my ears...
and gently caresses my face...

I love these lines here. I can feel every
word you have penned from your heart.
Keep up the wonderful writing.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

This is delightful. What a true gem, beautiful! It truly captures the essence of the sublime evening hours.
Light,
Siddartha

[BABSIE BEE]

Tell us more about your dear friend xxx

[Luna]

Great and lovely write!

"the moon shining bright...
amongst the zillion stars...
the sky, a dark shade of violet...
the clouds forming a veil, like one; of the czars... "

All of your word choices here were positively superb.

-Luna

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i like it ...great write and well written

[Brianna Brie]

I like the images you conjure up by using all five senses. Fantasy is a sense, right? Well, at least it is for me. lol Enjoyable read.

[sisyqueen2008]

i luv your poem! i do this too sometimes, it'll be like 11:55 and i'm takin' a walk outside :)

[Penny Dreadful]

good write


xxx

[EpicKizzy]

it says so much about your dear friend without even stating it was for her ur gifted my friend you truely are and who ever this is 4 im positive she loves it♥♥♥:)