My fantasy...

just a little " something" expressing my feelings for the "night"...the time i love the most...

sitting by the window...
the night it weaves a dream...
casting a spell upon me...
enchanted, i flow along a stream...

i leave the room, bedazzled...
walk out all alone...
not knowing why i do so..
just spell bound by the unknown...

bare feet as i step out...
am greeted by the cold...
the magic has just begun...
mysteries, they unfold...

the moon shining bright...
amongst the zillion stars...
the sky, a dark shade of violet...
the clouds forming a veil, like one; of the czars...

the view; picturesque...
a living fantasy for sure...
nature playing a song...
the music ever so pure...

the wind it quickly wraps me...
in a strong embrace...
sensuously whispers in my ears...
and gently caresses my face...

i stand on my toes to reach out to thee...
and open my arms as wide...
to feel the eternal bliss...
giving me a million rushes, with each rising tide...

nature at its playful best...
teasing me to delight...
my fantasies they grow...
as i make love to the night!!!

Author's Note

wouldn't have written this one if it wasn't for a dear friend...this ones for her...
still not complete though (maybe) (think i can write more...have lots to say on this...lets see)

Reviews

[Alana Michele]

The daze you created with the night, the calm, wonderful! It is an interesting way to put the personal nature of the night, but well written.

[fretch]

that so nice and sweet.

[shadadakiya]

WOW ,I LOVE IT

[Mindless Mindset]

Amazing! I could feel everything you described so vividly. Like a magical farytale. Perfect!

[Jenn Wathen]

Wow your writing is amazing wow....

[Spoken]

I'm a lover of the night as well :-)

very nicely done. Some say night is when everything sleeps, I think it's when everything comes to life! There's a peaceful calm in the stillness of the moonlight. Great piece!

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

my how intriguing...now im spell bound

[Jasmine]

I loved this, it was detailed and I could almost feel it....

[Fran Marie]

nature at its playful best...
teasing me to delight...
my fantasies they grow...
as i make love to the night!!!

What a lovely fantasy penned in beautiful poetic expression~
A most enchanting piece of poetry~FM

[emmajoy]

Beautifully written showing emotions and visions and so much more. You say above that it's written for somone and I'd have known that without being told.. it's as if you've opened a door into yourself and said 'Here I am, take me for what I am.'

' the wind it quickly wraps me...
in a strong embrace...
sensuously whispers in my ears...
and gently caresses my face... '

Love those lines because I can understand them. Great write, thank you for sharing