It hurts now...more than ever...

All alone in a corner of this world,
sitting with a picture of you in my hand.
Started from the top
and got down to the bottom of every bottle...

With the mere thought of making you mine
even in my hallucinations
or to just forget you altogether...
 
But just my luck
couldn't get either...
 
Caught in this very battle,
this heart aches,
longs for you in every beat.
Your name in every breath I take...
 
Wish I could just end it all
or could just rip this heart out for that matter,
because it hurts now
it hurts more than ever...

I feel you all around
in everything and in every one I see...
Yet I can't make you mine.

I reach out,
reach out to nothing,
moving my hands blatantly...
 
I'm loosing it
and it hurts now
it hurts more than ever...

Reviews

[Fredrick Malkyor]

Dear Barricade,

I sense a deep depression in the main character. I also see you made a refrence to the most common item that is involved in depression, alcohol. I wish to say that I admire this form of poetry, of course anything that is dark, depressing, and somewhat murderous is something to be admired by me. I would have to say that this poem was 'inspiring'.


Your Friend,

Fredrick Malkyor

[BABSIE BEE]

Deep stuff. So sore yea ??? Time is such a healer....honestly !! Loved this.
BBXX

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This is sooo sad.. wonderful flow but painful.. I can relate in many ways.. I think most can.. cheers to better days ahead! =)

[Laura Ex]

this captures the emotion of the obsessive nature of love. and how much it hurts to always be thinking about the person. good job. :]

[Alz Alz]

amazing work!! loved reading it.