What If...

just my thoughts...

What if???

what if i could just say what i wanted to...
without any pondering or further ado...
what if you could just hear the unspoken...
the words unsaid within the heart that's broken...
what if we hadn't made the mistakes we did...
would we still be apart, stranded....
what if we could turn back time...
would you run into my arms and still be mine...
what if my love wasn't this strong...
would yours alone have held us so long...
what if in the next moment i said I'll die...
would you want to hold me or even say goodbye...
what if God offered me a chance...
would we have our one last dance...
to see my love in one last glimpse...
hold you tight and kiss those lips...
after this I'd love to die...
at least we shared our last goodbye...

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

These are some very hard What ifs... heartbreaking to read.. Your ink drips the blood of your regrets .. I am so sorry you are hurting.. I read it in much of what you write but pain and suffering often what molds a good poet.. I am so glad you share your feelings with us... thank you, Rose

[Gheeneil]

A "what if", however, is related to false hope. Nonetheless, hope makes us alive and gets us going. Reality bites but such is life.

[shadadakiya]

very beautiful

[Darrel]

Mad flow. I love it! and your review literally made my day so.....thanks

[Anita B Jacques]

The what if, very different, a little overwhelming, I love the first half. Thank you for sharing. God Bless you.

[SallyS29]

A wonderful and expressive poem

What if you never stopped writing.. ?

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

I tend to wonder about the what if's myself at times... We just can't linger there... Can't change what's already happened but we can wonder and reminisce. A lovely poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[poetic soul]

interesting theme.....nice flow and good choice of words....

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Spoken]

what if's can drive a person insane. a torturous beauty you've got here.

what if you could just hear the unspoken...
the words unsaid within the heart that's broken...

that is a very interesting concept i think would be cool if it were a reality.

[17thWhitePrince]

Wow ... what a wonderfully beautiful and sad poem !!!
Wow ... you did such a most wonderful job writing it ... well done indeed I must say !!!
Definately one of my favorites !!!
I loved it !!! :)