What If...

just my thoughts...

What if???

what if i could just say what i wanted to...
without any pondering or further ado...
what if you could just hear the unspoken...
the words unsaid within the heart that's broken...
what if we hadn't made the mistakes we did...
would we still be apart, stranded....
what if we could turn back time...
would you run into my arms and still be mine...
what if my love wasn't this strong...
would yours alone have held us so long...
what if in the next moment i said I'll die...
would you want to hold me or even say goodbye...
what if God offered me a chance...
would we have our one last dance...
to see my love in one last glimpse...
hold you tight and kiss those lips...
after this I'd love to die...
at least we shared our last goodbye...

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

These are some very hard What ifs... heartbreaking to read.. Your ink drips the blood of your regrets .. I am so sorry you are hurting.. I read it in much of what you write but pain and suffering often what molds a good poet.. I am so glad you share your feelings with us... thank you, Rose

[Stephanie]

Everyone has those "what if?" questions in their mind the second we find someone we love enough that we think we can't live without them. I loved the flow of this and all the real emotion. Great job

[Sinny]

I just loved this! ^^

I love how the end was as it bending together creating something that speaks.

[Brianna Brie]

You did a great job writing this poem. It is so full of emotion...really gets me in the gut. kudos!

[Katherine Wyatt]

This is wonderful ...What if? ~sigh...so may of those... beautifully penned~

[♡Moon Child♡..]

...wow...that was very sad...it certainly struck home...That was lovely, my dear...^^ Keep writing.

[EpicKizzy]

i love it keep it up my friend.........

[emmajoy]

What if, indeed. Guess 'what ifs' are sad, sad words. But you've written your sad words so beautifully. It's a very poignant poem and that last line really hurts.

Sad but so well expressed

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was really a very well penned "What if" piece of writing, with such a flawless flow and brilliant usage of language.
"would you even to hold me or even say goodbye...
what if God offered me a chance... " - Loved these lines the most, very well penned!