Inamorata intoxication..........

That shimmering elixir of life,
poured into my glass.
A taste of the uninhibited,
awaits beyond my impasse.

Like a devious mistress,
tantalizing me in sultry ways.
Demanding intimacy with my lips,
to embalm me in moonshine haze.

All it takes is a kiss,
from this conniving paramour,
burning my insides
and the coyness that I bore.

Slowly captivating my senses,
she overpowers my whole.
Enslaved, I wear my heart on my sleeve
loosing all control.

I surrender unto this inamorata,
as I fulfill her every fantasy.
She only amplifies my desires,
unshackling the discreetest parts of me.

After our risque tryst
she puts me to slumber deep
the exploits of our night drowned in haze
just faint images she lets me keep...

Reviews

[Dewella~Vintella]

Ah, beautiful. The flow and rhythm was wonderful in this piece, and I was hooked from the first line. I felt myself drowning in your imagery, and captivated by your words as you sunk me into an intoxicated haze of hopeless desire and fantasy.. Excellent piece, keep up the good work.

[barricade]

Thank you Dewella...I'm glad my work was to your liking :)

[Divine Pain]

"...After our risqué tryst
she puts me to slumber sleep deep
the exploits of our night drowned in haze
just fait images she lets me keep"
Love this! Well put together!

[♡Moon Child♡..]

Truly lovely, your words pulled me in and painted such beautiful imagery. Well done.

[barricade]

A review after almost 3 years...had been gone for way too long...glad my words were to your liking...means alot to me...

[DayDreamer1292]

Beautiful! Intoxicating imagery... I was lost in your words. I love it!

[barricade]

Can't believe I'm reading this review after almost an year or more...I've been gone for way too long...thankyou for your kind words...glad you liked it...

[Traci]

Beautiful work, Barricade. The title captured my attention, and the beauty in your flow and rhythm captivated me throughout. Lovely work as usual.

[Ayesha Atif]

Definitely one of the best poems I have read.
Honestly it striked right into the heart. Powerful Imagery, literary techniques used beautifully.

Keep exercising your talent.

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Wow.. Nice writing. Keep writing. If possible then Do u read my writing Anguish?

[Enigma]

Loved the pace and the rhymes. Learned a couple of new words too. Keep up the good work! :)

[Shaquana Adams]

Demanding intimacy with my lips,
to embalm me in moonshine haze.

I really love the word play and imagery. Great job :)