Clandestine...

Hey YOU... Yes YOU!
Clandestinely following me here.
What do you see?
 
A shipwreck, a carcass,
the tombstone of unrequited love and misery...
 
YOU there...yes I'm talking to YOU...!
As YOU wonder, delving deeper into a buried memory...
 
That face YOU forgot,
the man YOU once loved,
with whom entwined was YOUR destiny...
 
YOU...Yes YOU...!
Still reading me ever so secretly...
 
Why follow me here now,
after making my love a tragedy?
 
YOU...Yes YOU...!
Look into my eyes,
and say that YOU don't love me...!!!
 
Why are YOU here now,
and what do YOU wish to see?
 
A broken man's 
broken hearted poetry?
Or an undying love for YOU
that I still bleed profusely...
 
YOU...Yes YOU...!
With those tears on your cheek..
 
That warmth YOU feel now,
is all that I seek...
 
YOU...Yes YOU...!
Look closely and YOU shall find...
 
I am nothing,
but a mere reflection of YOURSELF left behind...




"Peek all YOU may...seek all YOU must...however so clandestinely...but these words YOU should trust...I'm the mirror image of all that YOU used to be...My entirety is all YOU and there is no I left in ME..."

Reviews

[AYVID N]

In my opinion, they do not deserve such true and self-less love. When such love is not valued and reciprocated, we must move on.

You have poured your heart and soul into this poetry and it shows! Just proves that poetry should be written from the soul!

Thank you for sharing this superb creation of yours.

[Ayesha Atif]

Relates. Relates.
Why do we end up loving the ones who just don't deserve it.
Why does our love become a test paper?

Powerful write.
Keep exercising your talent.

[Sami Khalil]

"YOU...Yes YOU...!Look into my eyes,and say that YOU don't love me...!!! Why are YOU here now,and what do YOU wish to see? A broken man's broken hearted poetry?"

A splendid read and write...:)................

[Quill~]

Creatively crafted. Your powerful message hits home for me. Well done! :)