Forever unspoken...
A Poem by
barricade
Madness,
it ain't that simple no more,
that threshold has long been broken...
Insanity,
beyond limits for sure,
to my forsaken heart and mind a token...
To this cancer,
there ain't no cure,
feelings I've subsided will forever be unspoken...
© 2013 barricade
Author's Note
Insomnia talking...frustration bursting outta seams...disintegrating between the real the unreal and the surreal...
Reviews
Yeah insomnia really knows how to give rise to hatred! Raw emotions beautifully expressed. The red highlights were perfectly placed. Nice work with the rhyming!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Short, tragic, and heartfelt. I felt the sad and frustrated emotions of this write. Well done! :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Short, tragic, and heartfelt. I felt the sad and frustrated emotions of this write. Well done! :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
beautifully written i enjoyed reading
Posted 11 Years Ago
beautifully written i enjoyed reading
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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