Forever unspoken...

Forever unspoken...

A Poem by barricade

Madness,
it ain't that simple no more,
that threshold has long been broken...

Insanity,
beyond limits for sure,
to my forsaken heart and mind a token...

To this cancer,
there ain't no cure,
feelings I've subsided will forever be unspoken...

© 2013 barricade


Author's Note

barricade
Insomnia talking...frustration bursting outta seams...disintegrating between the real the unreal and the surreal...

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Yeah insomnia really knows how to give rise to hatred! Raw emotions beautifully expressed. The red highlights were perfectly placed. Nice work with the rhyming!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, tragic, and heartfelt. I felt the sad and frustrated emotions of this write. Well done! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifully written i enjoyed reading

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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