Nothing ever lasts...

You walked away,
without a goodbye.
We never had an eye to eye.
I kept asking, as to what went wrong.
You deleted me from your world,
took a step so strong.
And all I got, was a text,
"personal reasons"
at its best...

I never questioned,
you beyond that,
your word prevailed,
above the rest...


The little that I got to know you,
Was one of the best things I've had in a while.
You were a reason, for me to smile,
for me to forget my painful past.
But it was all momentary,
I forgot, nothing in my life
Ever does last...

Reviews

[Breathetheair]

the story of this is sad.. but when a door closes life opens a window I say.... I have to say though it can be very puzzling for someone to walk out of your life and their lives never seem to skip a beat, but those on the receiving end of a breakup are left in pause as to why things ended a certain way. Great read. I felt it. Thank you.

[barricade]

Thankyou for your kind words...I'm glad you like it :)

[Enigma]

Heartaches and heartbreaks - it's difficult to digest whatever reasons are provided. Well penned.

[Sami Khalil]

A nice one...:)

[barricade]

Thankyou...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Ama May Cooper]

This is so beautiful and so sad. I can empathise everything does come to end the good and bad, its a little depressing but nothing does last forever. I loved this piece such truthel sorrow

[barricade]

I'm glad you liked it :)

[chaotic katie]

very expressive piece, loved the emotion in it. Nice job!

[barricade]

Thankyou :)

[inkofme]

So sad! But it is beautiful

[barricade]

thankyou :)

[SyberRose]

Nicely done...and as they say the best things in life are saved for last.You have alot to look forward to. SyberRose

[barricade]

Looking forward is all I can do...don't really have much of a choice do I?

[Ritik]

so good at words,, can make anybody sad about the author and can make us feel the pain.

[barricade]

Thanx mate :)

[Arun Paul Kapur]

It's like a dagger through the heart, so powerful and sad. Bravo

[barricade]

Thankyou for your kind words :)

[AYVID N]

That's the way love goes!
The poem conveyed heartbreak and disillusionment of a betrayed love in totality.
The rhyming was impeccable, the flow just great...

Thanks for sharing Barricade!

[barricade]

I'm glad you liked it :)