For you...

I'll burn with the stars,
dash across the sky in fire,
every time you make a wish,
to fulfill your every  desire.

I'll be the coin you flip,
drown to the depths of a well,
to fulfill that very wish,
upon which you deeply dwell.

I'll be that very letter,
travel across the realms,
convey your heartfelt prayer,
to the almighty one who helms.

"You may not see me,
but all I see is you.
My wishes may not see light of day,
but I'll make your dreams come true"

Reviews

[beyondpen]

Wow! this poem is beautiful and yet so powerful that it made me wish I was that person you wrote this for ... Sigh! i m not :(
hehe.. but one thing i would still say, not from the poem point of view- it is impeccable, but in general- that Happiness is ones own choice... coz its not in being with or without someone else, but in being with oneself :)

[barricade]

Thankyou for your kind words...I'm glad you liked it :)

[Quill~]

Romance and wishes are intertwined together in this lovely piece. I like your choice to use the constellations to profess "love"- for the voice of a star crossed lover. beautiful work. :)

[Bowers]

this is a very beautiful poem, so thoughtful, filled with emotion... mmm, I really enjoyed this poem a lot. nicely written

[Just Kim]

Ever so lovely and nice.
once again the colors enlighten the feelings.
Very beautiful write.

[barricade]

Glad you like my work :)

[Wórdsmíth]

I'll burn with the stars,..i think your just this first line has already said much before i read out your this wriitn'. very deeply written...ain't ..?
your colorin' with words n your words in each line''re totally awesome to read...to see...to feel.

[Dhaye]

Wonderful piece. Simple metaphors make the poem shine.
Great work! Keep on writing.

[A. H. Pinley]

Who did you write this to? Nice piece!

[barricade]

Someone who doesn't even know as to just how fond of her I am ;)

[CookieDough]

Aaah! This is really sweet and hopeful. I love it!