Auburn glow...

I light it up for one last time
and watch the auburn glow

My being resonates in the ashes
of the cigarette I smoke
Soon I find myself at the f*g end
of the path I chose
In the cloud of smoke vignette my memoirs
one last drag, One last puff
before I snub it out cold
And watch die, the fading auburn
slow...

Author's Note

ehh...don't know how or why this one happened...

Reviews

[Reneé H]

You made smoking a cigarette such a beautiful experience! Exceptional word choice and great flow. Keep up the good work!

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is great, it really speaks of the emotional attachment that can develop between the smoke and the smoker. Nicely written.

[barricade]

Thank you :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Lily Mae]

I love it.. Your description is so strong that I felt as if I were there on inhale and watching the ember burn..and getting lost in the cloud of smoke.. Great write..xo

[A. H. Pinley]

Nice and simple.

[barricade]

Thankyou..

[Touché Armada]

I like it but I wanted to read "vignette my memories" as "vignette my memoirs", it just seems to want to go there. For the rest it's a clever piece.

[barricade]

Change made...thankyou