Rage!

In dire need of blowin off some steam...

Just wanna beat someone down to pulp,
punch him right in the face
crush some f*****g skulls,
deleting his every trace!

I just wish I could break some stuff,
destroy what comes in my way.
Dunno if this is who I am,
but its just how I feel today.
I may not seem like myself to you,
the calm one I used to be.
But the deep dark truth now is...

I'm always, always angry...!

Reviews

[Reneé H]

This is a vivid portrayal of anger! REally powerful and I think it flows really well too. It conveys a message and you are passionate about it. The colors are really cool too.

[Holly Mason]

angry-interesting word
it even sounds emotional-it is o.k. to be angry sometimes
you as always express yourself so vividly it makes you so real to the reader
like the questioning way you let us know what kind of mood you are in
thank you for so openly sharing

[barricade]

Thank you for taking out the time to read. Your words mean a lot to me :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Be angry but don't let it control you. When an emotion takes over you loose an important part of yourself. I love the way you wrote this, it's full of raw emotion , completely honest and open with nothing hidden.

[barricade]

Am trying hard... It's not the anger that has taken over... Rather another emotion acting catalyst...am glad you liked it :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Pain and hurt and fear often lead to anger. Whatever it is I hope you find a reprieve from it. :)

[Brave girl]

why are you angry??

[barricade]

It's just how I am now...when everything within jus keeps boiling up over time... It only turns into a volcano

[Brave girl]

i know what you're talking about ;)

[A. H. Pinley]

Change bones into skulls, but other than that I can hear the Hulk singing this while crushing cars and leaping one hundred miles.

[barricade]

lol...yeah..