two of a kind

glowing embers

and grey smoke

are the only things

visible in the dark

of

our night.

we lie down and we

speak

of our bitter pasts

experiences

yet we state 

how we will change

as i take in and exhale the smoke

i look at you

you intellectually

stimulate 

electric minds

two of a kind

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A stimulating poem indeed...Thank you for sharing...:)...........

[Nims FallingDewdrops]

Nice one...your words added somthing to my veiw about night. keep on!

[Michele]

so good, i love your poetic voice man