Tortured

Tortured

A Poem by barbwire
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Just a poem

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Her hair flows gently caressing her breast

Her eyes dance with laughter as she tortures you at best

The sound of the her voice caress my heart

I knew the vision of her

pitter patter, pitter patter from the start

As I glance at her aside from the rest

I am still enchanted, but her beauty will put my patience to the test

Torture at last

The future appears as the past

© 2008 barbwire


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Nice poem, Barbara.

Posted 16 Years Ago


You have expressed your emotions beautifully, well done! *Lana*

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so let me be your reminder
let me make the mistake for you
cuz i've learned she wasn't worth it
and i've learned that patience is a virtue

Posted 16 Years Ago



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