a day across 3

a day across 3

A Story by naruto
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i wanted to make something that is horror from my imagination

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at a summer night in the sleeping room i was alone when i felt somebody walking in the other room. i was so curios so i went there and expected to find something strange but i when i went there the sound disappeared so i thought that it was not more than imaginations after that,i returned to sleep but i couldn't because i was thinking of that incident,then i decided to go and sleep in an other room when i was on the way i have to cross 3 rooms to reach my brother's room,at the first room the weather turned cold at a summer night,at the second the sounds began to be louder,and at the third room i began to lose control then at the third that i reached by a miracle i saw phantoms with no eyes shouting and flying they crossed me and i was going to be panicked but i quickly opened my brother's room ,the weather turned hot,the sounds disappeared and every thing returned normal but i decided to not tell anyone because i don't tell anybody to not think that i am stupid

© 2011 naruto


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Great suspense...however, the grammatical mistakes caught me a bit off guard. The idea behind the story was interesting though :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


An excellent write....can feel the suspense in this write....

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i am a funny person take every thing easy like life and always accept what god gives to us more..

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failing is not wrong failing is not wrong

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