Thunder

an experiment waiting for class to start

 

Thunder crash and lightning streak

Sky above and mirror creek

Hammer strike and shield flex

Sinews taught and grim respects

Let blood fly and bones crack

Field and forest in death black

I stand alone with hammer high

Await ascent into dark sky

The roar has ceased and the world is calm

My heart is thunder, my shield, my palm

Spirits rise from souls now dead

Like wraiths and demons, screaming heads

Blood lays black upon the field

I lay myself upon my shield

And wait.

 

Author's Note

done in 5 minutes before class..lol .oh well.. what do u expect for a 5 minute poem?

Reviews

[Pevi Mae]

you pictured the scene well thru your writings

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

it is a good 5 minute poem i might add well done you could read my work if you would like to see what u think

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

Well for a five minute poem it was great i like the opening part.
"Thunder crash and lightning streak
Sky above and mirror creek"
It was great and I could pitcure and it made the poem even better!!!!