Weaponary

Weaponry

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Katana

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Sharp

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Glass

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Colors

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Red

Reviews

[Bethany_Savy]

I really like your circle poem. I like how the last one and first one relate but you have to think about it first. I also like how it's short and sweet. Maybe next time you write one, try and go a little bit more "off topic" and a little more "out there" so that it makes the reader think a little bit more. But all in all it is really good :)

[Madeline G]

Love love love the katana! Very short and to the point, not adding in fillers. In this case I think it is good that it is short. Not too many poems can pull that off but this one can. I love how these associations aren't obvious and you kind of have to think about it but you can also totally see how you got to the next word.

[Emily Wallace]

i like your circle poem. what was going through your head when you came up with the idea of weapons for this pem. :):):):):):):):):):):)

[Gaby Valverde]

I like it. I myself have a soft spot for different types of weapons, and i like the connections you made. You clearly put a lot of thought into making this. I also love the ending: short, yet speaks a thousand words.