Two

Sometimes I forget who we are

Then realise what we have become

Though constantly evolving

Beyond any control

Two half hearts

Merging into

one

Reviews

[dreamer :)]

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

This poem is perfect and it shows that your heart really isn't complete until the right person comes along, and not only changes your life, but changes you as a person! Thank you for sharing that wonderful poem! It was a very enjoyable read! :)

[Bare trees]

Not surprised to see all the reads, this poem is like a flower that's burst open silently with a simple premise. Love took over when you weren't looking. Great stuff. You're very good.

[deeps]

This is so true and so well said.

[.]

touching and emotional wrapped up in a few words, no mean feat.well done :)

[.]

love intimated evocatively-i love this!!!!

james:-)

[Robin]

lovely

[bbb]

I just think it's so cool how you got the words to literally take shape on the page. Love the visual, good writing!

[Miss Coral]

Concise, simple, and incredibly profound. These few words speak about so much, let the reader imagine the situation behind them, create an entire story in their head, based off a few lines. How writing should be. Great job.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

lovely~evocative unfolding and blending~