Happiness At Last

I was finally at a happy time in my life!! YAY!

The phone is ringing, I answer it and you say are you there.?I tell you that I am. You have just had your heart broken and you weren't even together. I ask you about this rumor. You tell me it's true and I find otu that you have liked for forever but you couldn't let my friend know. You tell me that you pretty much love me and you spill your heart to me. You ask me to be you only one. I think and change the subject but just before the phone goes click I say yes. Unbelieveable I am with someone I love and this is the one.

 

Lizzie <3

Reviews

[LostCauze[:P]]

I feel that this isnt really a poem. I mean a poem can be anything but to me, your just telling me what happend. It feels more of a short story. The structure wasnt really in traditional poem structure and i found some mis-spellings. On the third line you spelt out as otu. The third line was also worded wrong you wrote "you have liked forever" I think you were missing some words. I think you just typed your feelings as fast as you could and didnt re-check. Keep writing.