Elements

The five parts that make up my personality, though somewhat unequally.

 Fire:

The loyal, daring part of me.

The one which contains my pride.

My bravery.

The one which keeps me going.

The one which tells me

I am much stronger

Than what they all think.

A phoenix that grows from the ashes.

A creature of fire.

 

Ice:

The cold part of me.

The one which makes me turn my back.

The one that never gives another chance

Once someone has failed that chance.

It says 'so what?' and feels that way.

The part that never lets its guard down.

A lone wolf that holds its head high.

A creature of ice.

 

Air:

Gentle, compassionate

Fearful of all things cruel

Wispy, quick with wide eyes.

This part of me is almost lost.

Yet it is in me as I dance

And skate.

It's light, delicate.

A butterfly, fragile wings flapping.

A creature of the air.

 

Water:

Writing, thinking.

It is controlled by its gentle lapping.

The part of me that is cool and thinking always.

The part of me which turns

Feelings and emotions

Into works of art.

The one that makes me

Spend hours

Thinking.

A dolphin, its mind as great as any being.

A creature of the water.

 

Earth:

It contains my love.

My friendship and laughter.

My compassion towards almost everything.

Not lively, like air, but slow.

Gentle, murmuring.

Like air, nearly lost

to ice and fire.

A haven

For friends and family.

Few have obtained my friendship and loyalty.

A badger, slow and clumsy, though bravely loyal.

A creature of the earth.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[R. M. Adams]

Absolutely wonderful. As I am a huge fan of fantasy and spiritual writing, this connects me to both genres. The elements are a part of us in unique ways. Excellent.

[Lone Wolf]

Thanks, and welcome to this community!
I am also a fan of fantasy and spiritual writing. :) I had a sudden inspiration by playing the game Four Elements on the IPad... but I had to add ice in there because it's a major part of me.