My Never Ending Dream

This is my first so dont expect it to be good

My Never Ending Dream

 

In my dreams i feel so wild

It makes me feel like a little child

Even when life is cruel

And people treat you like a fool

Even when people say

 One day your dreams will go away

But if you heard what i told

That my dreams can never be sold

Not even for a piece of gold

So please understand how i feel

When i know my dreams are real

My never ending dream

 

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is a great first poem :)
Good Job

[Gene]

very good bambi lov gengen

[Kat]

i loved it. =]