Lost Soul

Lost Soul

A Poem by Jane Bryan
"

This is a message in a poem...try to figure it out.

"

A fairy at a garden's gate,

The sudden fear of her fate.

She sees the wolf with no disguise

He hides the plan of utter demise

 

The fairy waits so longingly

To meet her new friend with sudden glee

The Wolf, with a plan no one knows

To trick the poor girl, he bestows

 

Can no one see the fairy there?

As they open the gate to feel the air

They are just as guilty, some believe

If those people knew, they would heave

 

The gate now open, the fairy flies through

Not knowing what she is getting herself into

She waits before him with a smile on her face

He knows that he won't leave any trace

 

He talks to her, waiting to do the deed

Realizing it has become an unknown need

She wants him as a friend, that's all

I'm sorry to say that she will fall

 

They walk into the dark woods

Covered by the treetop hoods

He waits until the middle appears

Knowing that she may have fears

 

She looks at him, her new friend

Wondering if the walk will end

He looks at her with meaningful eyes

The eyes show happiness, yet lies

 

She doesn't have a chance to ask

Why he is wearing a sudden mask

He takes her down without a fight

Her soul, lost forever, since this lonely night

© 2010 Jane Bryan


Author's Note

Jane Bryan
Grammar and Spelling, sorry. and also, find a meaning

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aww... :} I lOvE this poem! It's so sad. Now I'm not gonna say I got what you meant by it but it feels like a story about a guy that hurts a girl in some way and she didn't expect it. Actually, I think she only expects good from him. If this is wrong, sry. yell at me someone -lol-

anyways even if I am wrong, I still love it :}
-QG

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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aww... :} I lOvE this poem! It's so sad. Now I'm not gonna say I got what you meant by it but it feels like a story about a guy that hurts a girl in some way and she didn't expect it. Actually, I think she only expects good from him. If this is wrong, sry. yell at me someone -lol-

anyways even if I am wrong, I still love it :}
-QG

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jane Bryan
Jane Bryan

Little Rock, AR



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