One Friday that Meant Nothing

Something I wrote for my English class.

One Friday that meant nothing,

I bid true love adeiu

and climbed aboard a sailing ship

docked in my living room.

 

The crew was very nasty,

they almost cast me to a whale!

But, as I proclaimed myself CAPTAIN! ,

so began our seaward tale.

 

We sailed the mighty oceans,

battled ferocious beasts,

we stopped twice for coffee,

and then created world peace.

 

Our journey was almost over

as we conquered Captain Hook.

And when our adventure came to an end,

I found myself at the end of my book.

Reviews

[crashandburnplz]

This is pree' creative.
I've never read anything like this. Good job. :]

I think you could possibly add a couple things, make it longer.

[Michael X]

quite crafty and creative, reminds me of a skit poetically devised and plays out with a sense of fun,
the metaphors bring your words to life, keep up the great work.

[Aekmy]

I love this. Reffering to Captain Hook brought me back to many memories.
Very cute write.