Shining star

All I remember was that

when I opened my eyes

you were in front of me

staring at me like

am the only shining star

in this entire universe

 

Although I couldn't look at you

at that moment

but that scene was entirely

captured in my heart

 

Days passed months passed years passed

but I couldn't delete the moment

in which you were shining like a diamond

in front of my eyes

even though the moment

didn't last for a long

I still can’t forget the scene

from my heart

Sometimes I wish you to appear in front of me

and surprise me  with that shining look

I hope to see you someday

so that I can see  you

and feel that you are my only

shining star in this life .........

 

   

Reviews

[Seuwandi]

What I understand is this is about love at first sight.
The poem is clear and good, it shows the longing and desire by one smitten with love. I also feel that you could increase the feeling of this poem, about intense feelings...the intensity of emotions should be showcased more