Lonely star

As I lay under the sheet of stars,

I don't look upwards for the fear that it will fall

Petrified I hold my heart too tight

not to lose it for once and all

Rhythm plays on its own in my mind

to soothe the sense and bring it to light

Forward backward as it goes along

getting calmer and then right piercing through my heart

Cutting it deeper without shedding tint of blood colored red wine

lapse of breath forces  unwinding the drapes of curled lashes

and look at the sky that is still shining

In Myriad of stars you are still alone

glistening foremost leaving else behind

I look at you you and find me

but why you don't close yourself

as I did mine

Why you set ablaze every single fleck you find

Oh shining star fall on me

and make yourself mine.

 

Author's Note

Thoughts on a sad night

Reviews

[Harris Malik]

Thoughts running wild on a night devoid of sleep .Vivid,sublime and well versed .Somehow you managed to make melancholy sound desirable .A pleasure to read :).

[Bhavana Singh]

Thank you Harris :). Sleepless nights tend to produce such melancholy .

[zainul]

I love your lovely thoughts.

[Bhavana Singh]

Thank you, zainul :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome:)

[Free_Soul]

very well composed :) Liked it !!!

[Bhavana Singh]

Hey, thank you :) keep reviewing further work.

[Free_Soul]

u r welcome :)

[Stephen]

Ah! Totally hopeless. Your salted emotions are get converted into the many forms of verbs. I hate seeing angels throughout their nights so don't be sad. Sadness n happiness always walk along the life. The Theme is pretty good.

Keep writing!

[Bhavana Singh]

Thanks for your opinion. Will look forward to be more optimistic.

[Stephen]

Welcome! So, when are ya gonna upload your new stuffs?

[Bhavana Singh]

very soon!

[Stephen]

Gotcha! Thanks for replying me!